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this - this is where the stars shine twice
once in their vast home in the skies
and again, reflected in the waters.
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:iconakogare:
This is very beautiful. Love the image it gives. Wonderful words you've chosen.
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:iconreadthewholelibrary:
Wow, very beautiful poem =)

I love the way you worded it!
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~RickDanger Oct 6, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Interesing idea :thumbsup:
I wonder, have you tried using a singular star? Something like:
this - this is where a star shines twice:
once as it leaves its home in the skies
and again as it gazes upon the water.
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:icontroubleinharlem:
I like that much better - thank you.
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